Series reviews

This is for series with at least three stories published only. No series with less, and no stories. If you post a section for your stories here, you must be open to any criticism, even if it may seem a little harsh.

Now for reviewers. If you are going to be critical, please try not to be to mean. To review, you must have read at least the first three stories in this series. Your review should be written like this:

Rating: (★ ★ ★ ★ ★  = Excellent, ★★★★☆  = Good, ★★★ ☆ ☆  = Okay, ★ ★ ☆ ☆ <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">☆  = Poor, <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">★ <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">☆ <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">☆ <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">☆ <span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;line-height:18px;">☆  = Bad)

<p style="font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Review: (Review goes here, followed by—YOUR NAME IN BOLD)

<p style="font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Thank you.

<p style="font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">NOTICE: People, please judge only by what's in the story. Not by how long/short the story is, not by how long it takes for a Set to come out, only by what's in the story.